Monday, August 24, 2009

When I felt your Love

My cloud teemed heart rained,
Pouring the heavy held love,
Little drops silently pattering,
Soaking my sweltering soul!
I lately felt her soothing warmth,
When I first held her in my arms,

She did make a silent cry,

Fearing my burning love eyes!
I send my kiss with quivering wings,
Miles it traveled trailing her vibe,
Hissing a feeble sorry she sent it back,
Restoring it with a coy countenance!
Her eye breakers reassured me,
That she found in me the finest love,
And her lips moved trifle aside,
Apprising bashfully “I felt your love”!
-Manoj Kelath

2 comments:

  1. well,,i really liked the poem,,,but seeing that image,,i dont see the whole point.,,my eyes are just glued to the image of that women ( :-) ) whom i hope i had seen the face,,

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  2. Thank u for the compliment aliyaa...
    well...I too was glued to the image of that someone....but that was juz once upon a time....

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