Sunday, December 06, 2009


THE UNFORTUNATES

I saw him and I saw ecstasy,

It was neither a ball nor a balloon,

But his vision of a beautiful world he dreamt,

He hopped against the dancing breeze,

And played with an imaginary sword,

And I wondered “who are the real unfortunates”?

I saw him as I crossed the bridge,

And he waved with all consummate happiness,

I waved back but failed to par,

He neighed and stabbed me with his imaginary sword,

I fell down like a lost warrior,

I wondered …“who are the real unfortunates”?

I was no way better than a goosy creature,

He saw me fall and laughed like a demented celebrity,

I presented him a ten rupee note; He grinned and ran to his tent,

With all the fervor he offered me an envelope,

I opened them with a little circumspection,

I observed…..and I cried!

It was a beautifully crafted airplane

with all the vigor and elegance.

He was no better than a slum kid,

But he had a lovely world in his eyes,

He hopped again and stabbed me with his imaginary sword,

I fell down but this time without wondering….”who the real unfortunates are”?

-Manoj Kelath

4 comments:

  1. Nice one! And spells an issue that we take for granted.

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  2. thank you Shawn...
    thank u Dileep aliya!

    Shawn lemme introduce Dileep to u...
    Dileep is presently doing his masters at the very prestigious IISc bangalore....a voracious reader ....excellent critic...My very dear friend(classmate)....and a true genious!

    And Dileep,lemme introduce to u my friend Shawnak....extremely talented,creative and adjectives to follow...He has been doing freelancing jobs...(web designing and all sorts of media works)....great artist,great writer...a passionate photographer and a very nice person!

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  3. great stuff implants thoughts in mind & more importantly beautifully composed...

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